Narrative Writing

Teenagers vs Darkness 

In class we have been doing fairytale narrative writing, we got to do our writing about a fairytail, myth or legend.

For my writing a decided to do about Harry Potter but changed it up abit to teenagers vs darkness.

What we had to do with the story we chose was in our own words change it up abit and make it our own story.

Here's the writing I have so far:

It was one stormy Friday night and 3 friends were looking for some fun having and decided to sneak around the school at 8:12 pm, there names were Zak, Krissi, and Acea, they didn't even know how dark it actually was until they saw they walked around and went into an unlocked room with Windows all around it.

That's when they soon realised how late it actually was, so they decided to go home but what they didn't know is that someone was watching them… Following them… Hunting them… 

Problem:

They were all having a laugh and being silly teenagers hiding files, moving desks, all of that silly stuff but...

All of a sudden everyone froze of fear after hearing scratches on the window, footsteps in the halls, crying in different rooms.

Seeing shadows zoom past, whispers in there ears.

But not just that they felt a presence no one has ever felt before.

Came to be that the time had flown by and it was now 1:34 am, the noises went on and on for at least 10 minutes but every minute it got closer.. And closer…

At first they just thought it was the janitor so they hid underneath the teachers desk, krissi ended up running out of the classroom seeing if it really was the janitor.

But she cam flashing back in slamming the door and getting the most heaviest things she could lift and started blocking the door as much as she could.

The boys started getting worried and asked what was happening, krissi just exclaimed “ tell u after just block ever entrance and shut all windows and turn the lights off now!” 

They got everything blocked and made sure no one and I mean no one could see through any hole any gap nothing.

“Krissi what's going on!” Acea whispered in fear.

“I...I…” Krissi stuttered.

“Krissi?” Karl questioned.

“I… I… Saw this. This.. Black creature” krissi said in fright.

The boys had no idea what to say, they were just speechless.

It wasn't even just speechless they were to confused with what to say cause they didn't know if it was real or not cause krissi loves to do pranks like this all the time.

“ are you sure that your not just seeing stuff?” Karl questioned.

“NO, I am %100 sure that it was real” krissi said as she started to cry.

 As soon as krissi started crying that's as soon as the boys new that it wasn't a joke, they could just tell cause she wasn't saying anything just curled up