She saw it coming from around the corner, something she had never seen before, it was almost like a creature.
She couldn't really see anything all she saw was a shadow of some sort with beedy White eyes that were as bright as a flashlight, and the teeth as sharp as a dragons scale. Before she could get a good eye on this.. Creature, it flashed before her eyes and appeared again across the road, like it wanted her to follow.
She wanted to find out who or what this thing was so she decided to follow.
About 22 minutes later of chasing and looking, she found her self in this abandoned mansion deep in the middle of the woods.
If your asking why it's abandon well she'll find that out very soon.
With in 30 seconds being in the mansion she heard a huge crash and bang down the dark long hall.
And she found her self in a situation no ones been in before the type of situation that she might not even make it out of here alive....
Monday, August 6, 2018
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Alyscia, I love how much you were able to write in such a short time frame. Your story had me on the edge of my seat wondering what she was going to find in the mansion.
ReplyDeleteI like the figurative language that you used when you said: "eyes that were as bright as a flashlight" and "teeth as sharp as a dragon's scale". I could see a clear picture in my mind because of the similes you used.
Very well done on this free writing activity.
- Miss Birtch