The mountain Catastrophe!!!
Today in Rimu for literacy we done writing about picture descriptions. I have made a slide with my story in it. Ill tell you more about after my story.
Here it is.
Thursday, November 10, 2016
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Hi
ReplyDeleteI love the story, it's really cool.
Bula Alyscia I love your story it is really cool.
ReplyDeleteHi Paris Bestie!
ReplyDeleteThe title is really good I love the vocabulary that you used in your title its really interesting!
I also love how you gave the characters random names but they are really cool, (my favorite name out of them is Paris of course LOLZA).
I was just wondering, how many days did it take for you to make this story?
KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK PARIS BESTIE!
Hey Alyscia it's Summer
ReplyDeleteI really like the names that you have used
for the people you have made this much more
understanding you have used so meany great
words I can tall you have put a lot of work
into this slide (keep up the great work alyscia)
blog you later.
Hey Alyscia.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great story gas lots of detail and is very interesting.
You did way better than me.
bye