Blog Comments Before and After

Writing Blog Comments Before and After

 

Before-

Alyscia.k14 October 2015 at 13:35

i really like that nathen its awsome

My comment has no capital letters for the start of my sentence also for the name. I also have not got end punctuation. 

After-

alyscia.k@blogger.co.nz26 June 2016 at 19:31

I think we should use skoolbo because we can learn a lot of stuff like math/Numeracy,Literacy, and more so I really do think we should keep on using skoolbo.For use out there who don't have an skoolbo account you should get it now :)

This comment has the three keys I'm pretty sure I't has Capitals, Punctuation,But the only thing I don't have is a greeting .

This has helped my writing by my progress and my learning of commenting.